I’m giving this another try. Borrowing words from REM’s Nightswimming.
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A photograph reveals the moon
Caught reckless, pining for the sun
Forever drawn, a quiet breath
Swims every light
A reminder, a quiet night
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Nightswimming – REM
Nightswimming deserves a quiet night
The photograph on the dashboard taken years ago,
turned around backwards so the windshield shows.
Every street light reveals a picture in reverse
Still it’s so much clearer
I forgot my shirt at the water’s edge
The moon is low tonight
Nightswimming deserves a quiet nightcaught
I’m not sure all these people understand
It’s not like years ago
The fear of getting The recklessness in water
They cannot see me naked
These things they go away
Replaced by every day
Nightswimming, remembering that night pining for the
September’s coming soon
I’mmoon sun
And what if there were two
Side by side in orbit around the fairest?The bright tide forever drawn Could not describe nightswimming
You, I thought I knew youa
You, I cannot judge
You, I thought you knew me
This one lughing quietlyUnderneath my breathNightswimming
The photograph reflects
Every street light a reminderNightswimming a quiet night
Deserves a quiet night
Deserves
Nice! I like your borrowing words.
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Thank you!
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So clever–and beautifully done.
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Thank you! Much appreciated!
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I admire your thought process ☺️.
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Thank you. You are too kind.
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bravo!
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Thanks, Ren! Congrats on publishing your new book! Very exciting!
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yes, that would be exciting– but unfortunately, no new book for this Ren. however, your enthusiasm for me was so inspiring, i now feel like i’ve let you down. *note to self: write new book! ❤
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Sorry about my confusion! But I do think you could write a good book…
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My favorite REM song by far. I like what you did with it.
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Thanks. Yeah, this song is a gem. I read that Stipe heard the melody once and then the next take he sang the lyrics as if a stream in consciousness. That first take of lyrics is the same as the final version. Pretty amazing story.
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Clever! I like it.
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Interesting to get to the end and follow your process back. Like this a lot.
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Thanks!
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